I Only Love My Greatest Enemy

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Eris Hapsburg endlessly pursued power throughout her life. Nothing else mattered to her. But she's assassinated and then is saved by Armand Concord, her greatest enemy. She comes to the conclusion that he actually loved her all this time. And maybe falling in love back wouldn't be a bad thing?

Come now and witness an Early Modern fantasy of love, manipulation, changing times, and political intrigue.

Note: This fantasy is set in the Early Modern period, not the Middle Ages. It is not Medieval.

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Status: Ongoing
Year: 2023
Author: Skarabrae

Chapters(97 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

Nemo BlancRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This genuinely caught me off guard in the best way. It’s a dense, Machiavellian tale of revenge, love, and time travel, anchored by one of the most dysfunctional romantic rivalries I’ve read in a while.The core premise is two bitter aristocratic enemies, Eris and Armand, locked in a lifelong feud, only to be thrown backward in time after Eris is murdered, is irresistible. Their love-hate dynamic is so intense it practically combusts, and it only gets more complex with each chapter. Eris is brutal, self-absorbed, and terrifyingly competent; Armand is calculating, guilt-ridden, and (secretly) a literal vampire. Somehow, they dance, duel, and nearly fall for each other again, even while plotting each other’s downfall.The writing is unapologetically rich in court intrigue and political scheming, layered with vivid worldbuilding and an almost gleeful use of archaic power structures. The style leans toward the verbose and occasionally unfiltered, imagine ifCode Geass,Game of Thrones, andThe Count of Monte Cristohad a baby, raised it on tragedy, and then gave it a rapier. Grammar is solid throughout, though the story could benefit from occasional tightening in dialogue rhythms and formatting for clarity. Still, the voice is confident and unique.Where this really shines is in the psychological game. Every interaction feels like a gamble, every smile a threat. Watching Eris and Armand pretend to be sweet childhood nobles while secretly scheming like adult war criminals is genuinely hilarious and intense.Verdict:Dark, romantic, viciously intelligent, and just the right amount of insane. Not for the faint of heart, but definitely for anyone who wants to see a love story go down in flames, rise from the ashes, and maybe burn the kingdom down again.
Bookman9Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I Love My Greatest Enemy is a real page-turner, diving into the juicy drama between our two main characters.Style: The way the story switches between Armand and Eris's perspectives keeps things fresh and gives us a peek into their minds. The flashbacks are very compelling. They filled in all the gaps in our protagonists' thought processes.Story: The love-hate relationship between Armand and Eris is the real spice of the story, driving the plot forward in all the right ways. You can practically feel the tension between them as they uncover the bigger mystery as to why things turn out the way they are from Prologue onwards.Character: Eris is a total boss with her detective-like skills and sharp mind, while Armand brings a whole other level of complexity. He's not afraid to get his hands dirty if it means doing some good, and that adds a whole other layer of intrigue to the mix. And let's not forget about those misunderstandings! They're like the cherry on top, pushing the story in unexpected directions.Grammar: There is nothing to say here. perfect 5/5. No mistakes that detract readers from fully immersing themselves in the story.Overall, The Rivalry between Armand and Eris is a seriously fun read, blending mystery, romance, and a whole lot of drama into one addictive package. Give it a go!
James BailyRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
You should read this. It is enjoyable. The first main character is evil. The second is good. It's so much fun as they.... uh spoilers? fight each other? And then~~fall in love tilde tildeAnyway. The style might be off putting for people who only like one pov, but I liked it.I have not noticed any grammatical mistakes.The most important characters are the main characters. There isn't much development for side characters...The story is delicious~Overall I rate it 98/100 as I have stories that I enjoy more than it.
Eli'sPencilRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Story and CharactersSo far this is one of my favorite stories on here. I can one hundred percent see this as an anime and I’d be down for it. In a way, it sort of reminds me of Love is War, one of my favorite anime to watch. Without giving too much away, the two main characters are basically playing romance chess with each other to reach their end goal. Eris, the female lead, is amazing. She definitely steals the show.GrammarThe grammar is great as well. The only issue I have is the way the author does line breaks. I’m not sure how it is done, but there’s a line break feature. You don’t need to spam dashes on Royal Road. That’s all the negatives though. It’s a great read. I’ll be following along as the story progresses.StyleThe style of writing sort of reminds me of how a story like Death Note would be interpreted as a novel. I love how the characters spend almost entire chapters just thinking and planning, which makes the characters even more likable because I get to truly understand their motivations.It's a very fun read, I urge anyone to check it out.
Of Rantings and RamblingsRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
There's a lot to like about this story, one of the main things, for me, is the setting. As far as I can tell it's somewhere around late 17th/early 18th century Eastern Europe in technological and cultural terms, with the major change being, of course, the presence of magic. The major issue I often find in stories that throw magic into heavily real-life inspired places is that it makes it questionable that other technologies or weaponry would really find use (In G.R.R Martins' paraphrased words, if wizards can destroy armies in an instant, then the question becomes "why bother assembling armies?"), but I Only Love My Greatest Enemy seems to have balanced its magic extremely well very early on in a way that makes it useful but not a direct replacement for the arquebuses and pikes of its conventional warfare.In terms of plot, so far, we have a time travel story, and that particular element is used extremely well with a pair of very clever political schemer protagonists. If you ever get tired of characters who seem to always out-think everybody with impossible, irrational leaps in logic then you'll find the mind games of this story very refreshing, as both protagonists are written with a consistent and realistic level of intelligence that nevertheless still manages to impress. They're geniuses in the way Leonardo Davinci might have been, not geniuses who make you wonder how their skull has room for all the extra brain matter.Stylistically it's fairly standard, I would say. Very serviceable and good at conveying what needs to be shown quickly, with plenty of detail when necessary and the occasional, well-chosen moment of deeper description that doesn't break the pacing. The characters are fun, the plot is interesting, and the humour is very subtle and low-key, grim as it is. Overall I Only Love My Greatest Enemy is an easy recommendation.
Pianos In The Evening SunRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
From our trades, I have already read Accountant Isekai, and I am very fond of this author's sense of humor. The way he writes oblivious characters and banter is top notch. And it's no different here.Eris is a wonderfully and wickedly evil character who is killed because she has a bucket list of people she's done wrong, but then she is saved by Armand, her greatest enemy. Normally, a character like her should be despicable but the gleeful absurdity of her evilness is so loveable and just plain funny. Armand is the more sensible one but he too has a dark background he struggles with. Their banter and constantly trying to outwit the other one turns this occasionally violent drama into a hilarious romantic comedy sometimes.As far as the grammar and style, I adore this author's style as I mentioned because I too love character banter and humor the most. I did not find any errors and I'm sure with the amount of people who have read it, they have pointed out any grammar errors.The last thing I'll mention is that the author also has fantastic knowledge of history, making this medieval type background realistic and thoughtful while allowing the characters to shine. I learned quite a bit from reading it and you will too.Highly recommended and if you like the author's style like I do, you will love Greatest Enemy too!
Kio-chanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Grammar:The story maintains a consistent and clear narrative style throughout, effectively conveying the emotions and actions of the characters. The dialogue flows naturally, with appropriate punctuation and sentence structure enhancing readability. There are occasional minor grammatical errors and typos, but they do not significantly detract from the overall storytelling experience.Story Development:The story unfolds with a gripping blend of mystery, tragedy, and intrigue, drawing readers into the complex world of Armand Richelieu Concord and Eris. The opening scene sets the stage for a compelling murder mystery as Armand discovers Eris' lifeless body and grapples with the implications of her death. Through a series of flashbacks, the narrative delves into Armand's troubled past, revealing the traumatic events that have shaped his character and motivations. As the story progresses, the tension builds as Armand confronts Eris' apparent betrayal and grapples with his conflicting emotions towards her. The introduction of time manipulation adds an intriguing twist to the plot, raising questions about fate, morality, and the consequences of one's actions.Character Development:The characters are intricately developed, each with their own motivations, flaws, and internal conflicts. Armand emerges as a complex protagonist haunted by past traumas and driven by a sense of duty and revenge. His relationship with Eris is fraught with tension and ambiguity, as he grapples with conflicting feelings of love, hatred, and betrayal. Eris, on the other hand, is portrayed as a manipulative and enigmatic antagonist, whose true intentions remain shrouded in mystery. The dynamic between Armand and Eris is central to the story, as they navigate a delicate balance of trust and deception, love and betrayal. Supporting characters, such as Armand's family and Eris' parents, add depth to the narrative, providing insight into the social and political dynamics of their world.Overall, "Armand Ric
Undefined VoidRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
If you don't like AI art I'd suggest you skip this story, as every chapter opens with an AI image.The author wasn't joking with enemies to lovers, they truly were enemies, as they did try to kill each other.Though it was weird how the first thought Eris (FL) had after Armand (ML) told her he didn't want her to actually be dead is that he loves her. Seems like a bit of a leap. But then the story ran with it in a very interesting way, so I don't mind it. It's funny how smart the leads are except when it comes to each other and love. It's nice to read how they plot their schemes, against each other and against others. Though Eris is far from a good person, she is very well written, and a likable character. I also like the way the future memories are incorporated into the now, which is the past.The story itself is very well written, in a way that makes you want to keep reading. It moves at a nice pace where you don’t get bored with anything.I didn't notice any grammatical mistakes, so even if there are any, they aren't obvious.
ZarthosRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Grammar is great. There's really nothing else to say.Story is decent. A lot of names are thrown around in the first few chapters, and you might get confused, but the main characters' goals are well-defined. You can simply ignore most of the events referenced and just follow the main story. The story is mostly centred around the interaction between the two main characters. It might seem like your typical villainess time-loop story but there are unique twists that make the story still feel fresh.Style is interesting. There is a lot of dialogue, which allows us to access the two main characters' inner thoughts. It's not my favourite, but their interactions are well-built. Chapter 2 has a lot of exposition that I feel could have been better placed elsewhere. The reader will probably forget most of it until it is brought up again in the story. Other than that, the dialogue is great. You can really feel the characters' different personalities through it.Characters are great. This is the highlight of this story. Armand is a gray character while Eris is pitch black. It's fun seeing her try to match him and fail. I really like her. Armand is your typical noble with a troubled past while Eris just seems pure evil, arrogant and self-centered.
cat9854Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
StyleThis story presents a very unique style, switching back and forth between the two main characters and delving deep into their thought processes. The way their thoughts are italicised make it easy to follow, but I do feel that they should not be put in quotations like normal dialogue speeches.The story is also mostly propelled by dialogue. Lots and lots of dialogue, and it is not a bad thing because it actually helps to build character and drives the plot too. Each character feels distinct through their dialogue alone.GrammarNot much comment on this one. The language used fits the theme of the story. Generally the grammar is good, but perhaps there is room for refinement (some parts can be more concise). Vocabulary is simple, not too bombastic, which is great, but of course several places could use stronger words as well to evoke a greater impact.CharacterI absolutely love the dynamic and history between the two main characters. Edis is potrayed as an unredeemable narcissist, a pure evil female villian while Armand is portrayed as a male character that won't hesitate to kill for self-preservation. The two are opposites of each other in this regard, which I think is very interesting as it makes me want to read on to see how it pans out. But there are instances where the characters don't feel likethemselves, instead only being there to drive the plot forward. Regarding other characters, they feel rather flat, reminsicient of Instant Death where only the MC and his companions are important while everyone else are justthere for the story. More work could perhaps be put into the side characters as many of them seem to be integral in both main characters' motivations and backgrounds.Additionally, I like the use of art at the beginning of each chapter, but maybe some description can be poured into all of the characters so that readers can have a physical image of the characters in their minds.StoryThere are alot of politics in this world, especially concerning the powe